Have the General say one thing, while the ledger shows he meant the opposite.
A list of things he has sacrificed, including personal feelings. Bound to the General by Selina Storm
Side-bar notes showing the General's true intentions for a mission. Have the General say one thing, while the
A visual or narrative tally of what the protagonist "owes" the General. 🛡️ Why It Works Have the General say one thing
In Bound to the General , the tension hinges on the power imbalance and the high stakes of a military or dystopian setting. A feature that would deepen the reader's immersion and the characters' connection is 🖋️ The Feature: The General’s Ledger
Start each chapter with a brief, cold military log entry.
The shifting tone of the ledger entries tracks his growing obsession. 🚀 How to Implement It