The following Saturday, instead of nursing a hangover in a darkened room, he woke up at 6:00 AM. The air smelled like damp earth, not stale gin. He drove three hours north to a cottage he’d bought on a whim, far from the reach of a cell tower.
The neon sign for "The Electric Slide," the city’s loudest underground jazz club, flickered one last time before Elias turned the key in the lock. For thirty years, this basement had been his lungs. He lived for the velvet smoke, the 2:00 AM sax solos, and the thrill of a packed house. But tonight, the silence felt better.
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